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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a passenger on a flight number BA 793 of your company. I took the flight from America January 3, 2017. Unluckily, I find one of my suitcase lost at the airport. Here I am eager writing to you to ask for help.

The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with my name tagging on the handle, which contains many important personal files and some scientific material. It took me much times and energy to get them but they are valuable in my scientific study. Beside, there are some presents which I bought them for my friends and family members.

I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

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【解析】本文主要讲了李华在乘坐飞机时，丢失了自己的一个手提箱，他希望工作人员帮他找回来。

考查冠词。特指“BA 793航班”，所以用定冠词，a改成the。

考查固定用法。表示在“在几月”，用on，所以January前加on。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以find改成found。

考查固定结构。one of + 可数名词的复数，所以suitcase改成suitcases。

考查副词。修饰动词writing，用副词，所以eager改成eagerly。

考查固定结构。my name 与tag之前是被动关系，所以用with sth done结构，所以tagging改成tagged。

考查固定句型。It took sb. some time to do sth. 花费某人多长时间做某事，是固定句型，所以times改成time。

考查连词。It took me much time and energy to get them 与they are valuable in my scientific study之间是并列关系，所以but改成and。

考查副词。此外，里面有我给我的朋友和家人买的礼物。表示“此外”，所以Beside改成Besides。

考查定语从句。which I bought for my friends and family members. 是一个定语从句，修饰先行词some presents，关系词在从句中作宾语，指物，所以去掉them。