题目内容
4.随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人喜欢走出家门去领略世界的秀丽风光,请你以The Advantages of Travel 为题,谈谈旅行的好处.注意:1.词数:120左右;
2.适当发挥想象,增加细节,以使行文连贯.
The Advantages of Travel .
分析 (高分句型一)①As far as I am concerned,traveling can ②not only make ourselves relaxed but also broaden our mind and enrich our knowledge.
①在表达自己观点时,使用as far as I am concerned短语;
②使用了not only…but also不仅…而且句型;
(高分句型二)Traveling can provide us chances to deal with problems,thus we can gain more knowledge and improve our ability.
该句型首先使用traveling动名词做主语,在表达旅行好处时,使用了deal with、gain more knowledge、improve our ability三个并列短语;
高级词汇:broaden扩大;enrich丰富;
It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books使用了谚语,旅行一万里路不如读一万本书;As far as I am concerned就我而言;表示列举Secondly,Besides,;
解答 The Advantages of Traveling
As the Chinese saying goes:"It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."(高分句型一)As far as I am concerned,traveling can not only make ourselves relaxed but also broaden our mind and enrich our knowledge.(列举旅游的好处) When we are traveling,we will be lost in the beautiful scenery and forget our stress and worries,(第二条好处)Secondly,when traveling,we may meet some people who share the same interest and hobbies with us,and we may develop a lasting friendship.(第三条好处) Besides,those who travel far know more.(高分句型二)Traveling can provide us chances to deal with problems,thus we can gain more knowledge and improve our ability.
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
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