题目内容
13.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Three years before,like many another girls who were addicted to novels,I was crazy about original English novels.Despite of the fact that many people around me thought that I had no talent for foreign languages,for I often failed pass my English exams,I was determined to read one chapter the day.Though I often couldn't understand,1was confident just because I was interested in English novels.Finally,my perseverance pays off and I made a tot of progresses in English.This experience has made me firm believe that it really matters on my way to success is interest.
Interest does have a big influence on myself,which I think will without doubt benefit my future career.
分析 文章大意:本文讲述了3年前,就像许多沉迷于小说的女孩一样,我对原版英语小说很着迷,尽管我身边的很多人都认为我没有外语天分,因为我经常考试不及格,但我下定决心要读一章,虽然我经常听不懂,但我很有信心,因为我对英语小说很感兴趣,最后,我的毅力得到了回报,我的英语进步了,这一经历让我坚信,在我通往成功的道路上,真正重要的是兴趣.
兴趣确实对我有很大的影响,我认为这将毫无疑问我未来职业生涯中受益.
解答 Three years before,like many another girls who were addicted to novels,I was crazy about original English novels.Despite of the fact that many people around me thought that I had no talent for foreign languages,for I often failed∧pass my English exams,I was determined to read one chapter the day.Though I often couldn't understand,1was confident just because I was interested in English novels.Finally,my perseverance pays off and I made a tot of progresses in English.This experience has made me firm believe that it really matters on my way to success is interest.
Interest does have a big influence on myself,which I think will without doubt benefit my future career.
详解:
1.before 改为ago,考查副词辨析,ago是副词,因此表示时间段的词语常常放在它前面,含义是从现在算起的若干时间以前,谓语动词一般使用过去时.before也可以用作副词,通常表示从过去某一时刻算起的若干时间以前,谓语动词常用过去完成时.根据后面的时态were addicted to novels,应该用ago.
2.another改为other,考查形容词辨析,other作形容词,通常用在单数或复数名词的前面,意为"别的;其他的;另外的".another泛指不定数中(三者或三者以上)的"另一个".another前面不能用定冠词the,它作为限定词(定语)通常与单数名词连用,但是它后面可以跟few或基数词的复数名词.
3.去掉of 考查介词,despite"尽管,不管",相当于介词短语in spite of.
4. 加入 to,考查动词不定式,"没能做…"是fail to do,
5.the改为a,考查冠词,"一天一张,一天一次"里的一天用a,"one chapter a day,once a day"
6.pays改为paid 考查时态,此处为对过去事件的描述,应该用一般过去时.
7.progresses改为progress,考查名词的数,progress"进步"为不可数名词,没有复数.
8.firm 改为firmly,考查副词用法,此处修饰动词"believe"应该用副词.
9.it改为what,考查代词,在that引导的宾语从句中,有一个主语从句"what really matters on my way to success80"在从句中what又作主语,又起了连接词的作用,it 不能连接句子.
10.myself 改为me,考查代词,反身代词与句中的主语是同一人,而本句主语为interest,所以用me.
点评 整体把握短文大意,弄清短文的基本时态,分析句子之间的结构关系,结合上下文语境运用词汇,语法等基础知识找出文中的错误并加以修改.
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