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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改．　　
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．　　
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．　　
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．　　
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jerry，
     I'm sorry for having no time to pay visit to Hangzhou with you next week．The reason why I can't spare time is because there are many friend of mine who are facing a coming English exam．There has no doubt that it is important for them．They are looking forward on to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successful．As a result，I will spend time help them at that time．In addition，I will attend a party which aim to raise money for the people in the earthquake-hit area．But l want to put off their time of the visit to the first weekend of next month．Is it OK？
    Best wishes!
Yours
                                                 Li Hua．

分析 本文主要讲述作者下周没有时间参观杭州，因为一要为即将到来的英语考试作准备，二要参加一个募捐晚会．因此要推迟参观时间，为此而感到抱歉．

解答 Dear Jerry，
     I'm sorry for having no time to pay∧visit to Hangzhou with you next week．The reason why I can't spare time is because there are many friend of mine who are facing a coming English exam．There has no doubt that it is important for them．They are looking forward on to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successful．As a result，I will spend time help them at that time．In addition，I will attend a party which aim to raise money for the people in the earthquake-hit area．Butl want to put off their time of the visit to the first weekend of next month．Is it OK？
    Best wishes!
Yours
                                                 Li Hua．
1．加a 考查冠词．pay a visit to意为"去参观，拜访"，是固定搭配．
2．because改为that 考查连词．the reason后接表语从句时，连词用that不用because．
3．friend改为friends 考查名词．friend是可数名词，其前有many修饰时，要用复数形式friends．
4．has改为is 考查固定搭配．there be意为"有"，不可与表示"有"之意的have连用，且主语doubt是不可数名词，be用is．
5．去掉on 考查介词．look forward to意为"期望，盼望"，是固定搭配．
6．successful改为successfully 考查副词．get through是动词短语，要用副词修饰，形容词successful的副词是successfully．
7．help改为helping 考查动名词．spend time/money （in） doing sth．花费时间（金钱）做某事．
8．aim改为aims 考查动词时态．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词party指物，关系代词which是单数三人称，谓语动词也要用单数三人称形式aims．
9．But改为So 考查连词．根据句意，前后两个单句表示因果关系，并不是转折关系．
10．their改为our 考查代词．根据句意，应是推迟"我们的"的时间．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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