Question

【题目】【改编】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Jack写封信，告诉他你姐姐恩雅将去他所在城市上大学，带去他想要的那件中国瓷器，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

恩雅：高个子，偏瘦，穿黄色裙子，戴眼镜

航班号：CA988

到达：9月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Jack,

How are you doing?

______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my sister Anya is going to your city to register for college, and I’ve asked her to bring you the set of china which you’ve asked for before。

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my sister at the airport and take her to her college since this is her first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

Her flight number is CA988, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, September 6. My sister is tall and thin ,she is wearing glasses. And she will be in a yellow dress。

Looking forward to your reply。

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，请你给笔友Jack写封信，告诉他你姐姐恩雅将去他所在城市上大学，带去他想要的那件中国瓷器，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

恩雅：高个子，偏瘦，穿黄色裙子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA988 到达：9月6日上午11:30。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。词数100左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体，篇章结构，语言表达的连贯性和地道性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：register for、which引导的限制性定语从句，since引导的原因状语句等都很不错。