题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Otis对你校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛很感兴趣,但是他不知道是否该参加,因此给你写了一封邮件。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 建议参加;
2. 给出理由;
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Otis,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held in our school. In my opinion, you should participate without any hesitation.
First of all, you are fond of Chinese songs and quite good at singing them and the competition allows you to show yourself on stage. Besides, through this competition, you will know your strengths and weaknesses so that you can make improvements on singing Chinese songs. In addition, you will meet many people like you, which helps you to make more friends and learn more about Chinese songs.
All in all I think you should seize the chance. I believe you will benefit a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作,要求考生写一封邮件,在邮件中写明:建议Otis参加你校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛;给出建议他参加的理由;表达你对他的期望。
第一步:审题
体裁:一般性应用文——书信(邮件)
格式:格式是书信,要写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,还要有结尾语
要点:要包括三个要点——1. 知道Otis想参加学校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛很高兴,建议他参加;2. 给出建议他参加的理由;3. 表达你对他的期望。
结构:总分总法
第二步:列提纲(重点短语和词汇)
be interested in ; the Chinese Singing Contest ; participate ;on stage; strengths; weaknesses ;make improvements ; seize
第三步:连词成句
It’s great that you are interested in the Chinese Singing Contest .
I think you should participate.
You are fond of Chinese songs and quite good at singing them.
You will make improvements on singing Chinese songs.
You will meet many people like you. It can help you to make more friends and learn more about Chinese songs.
I am sure you will benefit .
第四步:连句成篇
第五步:润色修改