题目内容
9.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
When I was young,I didn't know that friendship was.When I stayed with my friends,a warm feeling came out the bottom of my heart.Now I have grown up and make many friends.And I have experienced the true feeling of friendship.When I am happy,they are also happy and share the happy with me.When I make progress,they will get more exciting than me.Beside,when I am in a difficult situation,they will offer help to me.But friendship is never an one-way ticket.If we want to get it,we must treat others good at
first.We should always be ready to help the others,especially when you are in trouble.
分析 作者在本文阐述了自己多友谊的观点,作者认为真正的友谊是分享幸福,共度困难.
解答 When I was young,I didn't know that friendship was.When I stayed with my friends,a warm feeling came out∧the bottom of my heart.Now I have grown up and make many friends.And I have experienced the true feeling of friendship.When I am happy,they are also happy and share the happy with me.When I make progress,they will get more exciting than me.Beside,when I am in a difficult situation,they will offer help to me.But friendship is never an one-way ticket.If we want to get it,we must treat others good at first.We should always be ready to help the others,especially when you are in trouble.
详解:
1.that改为what;考查宾语从句.what引导宾语从句并在从句中作表语.that引导宾语从句时在从句中不作成分.
2.out后加of;考查介词.come out of"从…出来",后面接宾语.
3.make改为made;考查动词时态.本句中的and连接两个并列的过去分词grown和made.
4. progresses改为 progress;考查名词.progress是不可数名词,无复数形式.make progress意为"取得进步".
5.exciting改为excited;考查形容词.exciting表示事物"令人激动的",excited表示人"感到激动的".
6.Beside改为Besides;考查形近词辨析,beside意为"在…旁边",besides意为"除…之外",结合上下文分析此处要用besides.
7.an改为a;考查冠词.one-way尽管以元音字母o开头,但读音以半元音[w]开头,其前面的不定冠词用a.
8.good改为well;考查副词.副词well修饰动词treat.
9.去掉the;考查不定代词.此处表示泛指"别人",与上句中"others"的用法一致;the others表示一定范围中的另一些人或物.
10.you改为they;考查代词.此处代词指代前面的others,故用they.
点评 在这个短文改错中首先要通读全文,了解短文基本大意,再结合上下文语境分析句子之间的关系,运用所掌握的基础语言知识找出文中的错误所在.