Question

短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
Dear Zhou Lu,
I’m writing a letter ask you for some help.
As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing whatＩsaid, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour, but I can’t forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I’m afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?
Your friend,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【小题1】letter后面加to
【小题2】friend改成friends
【小题3】去掉on
【小题4】tell 改成told
【小题5】extreme改成extremely
【小题6】his改成 her
【小题7】Facing改成Faced 或去掉with
【小题8】much改成very
【小题9】that改成when
【小题10】How改成What

解析试题分析：
【小题1】letter后面加to，考查不定式做目的状语，句意：我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。
【小题2】friend改成friends，主语是Zhang Fei and I所以应该是friends
【小题3】去掉on，词组：“某一天”one day不用加介词
【小题4】tell 改成told，这篇文章用的是过去时。
【小题5】extreme改成extremely，修饰angry应该是副词extremely
【小题6】his改成 her，人称错误，前面是her，后面也是her
【小题7】表示“面对…”,可以是Sb facing sth，也可以是Sb be faced with ，所以Facing改成Faced 或去掉with，
【小题8】修饰形容词angry用very，much一般修饰不可数名词，或形容词，副词比较级
【小题9】考查定语从句：先行词是the wonderful time 定语从句中缺少地点状语，that改成when
【小题10】考查疑问词：这句话的do缺少宾语，用疑问词What。
考点：考查学生在上下文语境中对词汇语法的掌握情况
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。