Question

【题目】书面表达

高考临近，许多家长用金钱、旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学。假定你是高三学生李华，请根据所提供的有关信息，给某英文报社写封短信。

内容要点：1.许多家长用金钱、旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学；

2. 可能会导致学生只关注物质奖励，而减少学习乐趣；

3. 一旦获得想要的奖励就失去了学习动力；

4.你的建议。

注意： 1. 不要逐词逐句的翻译。 2.为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节。

3. 词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

Dear Editor,

With the college entrance examination approaching_____________________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

With the college entrance examination approaching, many parents try to encourage their children to study hard and be admitted into a famous university. They promise that they will be rewarded with things such as money, traveling and so on once they achieve the goals.

However, I don't think this is a proper way. Firstly, it may lead to the fact that children's attention will focus on such things instead of the pleasure of studying. Secondly, they may stop working hard as soon as they get what they want.

I think a wise way is to make us aware of the importance of going to a good university. We should also study hard and well for our future.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：高考临近，许多家长用金钱、旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学。假定你是高三学生李华，请根据所提供的有关信息，给某英文报社写封短信。内容要点：1.许多家长用金钱、旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学；2. 可能会导致学生只关注物质奖励，而减少学习乐趣；3. 一旦获得想要的奖励就失去了学习动力；4.你的建议。

注意：1. 不要逐词逐句的翻译。 2.为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节。3. 词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

【亮点说明】They promise that they will be rewarded with things such as money, traveling and so on once they achieve the goals.运用了宾语从句； Firstly, it may lead to the fact that children's attention will focus on such things instead of the pleasure of studying. Secondly, they may stop working hard as soon as they get what they want.这句话表现出了文章的层次性；