题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你们班留学生 Jim 现在美国居家学习,请给他写一个电 子邮件,内容如下:1.告诉他你们学校即将举行在线运动会(运动会形式,内容……);
2. 邀请他参加。
注意:1.词数不少于 50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I heard that you have studied at home in America these days. How is everything going? I am glad to tell you that our school will hold an online sports meet.
The sports meet will be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 am on April 20. In the sports meeting, students can involve themselves in various online activities, such as Rope Jump, long jump competition, relayrace and running with a ball. During the rest time, you can also enjoy some wonderful performances taken by cheerleaders. I’m sure you will have a great time with us.
Besides, there will be a free conversation session, which would be a good chance for you to make more Chinese friends.
We will be honored if you can join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
此篇书面表达为应用文。要求考生写一封邮件,邀请留学生参加在线运动会。
第一步:审题
题材:应用文。
人称:第一人称、第二和第三人称。
时态:一般将来时和一般现在时为主。
要点:
告诉Jim学校举办在线运动会;
运动会的时间;
运动会的具体项目;
邀请Jim参加。
第二步:列出重点短语
hold an online sports meet; involve oneself in …; various online activities;
enjoy some wonderful performances; have a great time; make more Chinese friends.
第四步:连词成句
I heard that you have studied at home in America these days.
I am glad to tell you that our school will hold an online sports meet.
The sports meet will be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 am on April 20.
In the sports meeting, students can involve themselves in various online activities, such as rope Jump, long jump competition, relayrace and running with a ball.
You can also enjoy some wonderful performances taken by cheerleaders.
I’m sure you will have a great time with us.
There will be a free conversation session, which would be a good chance for you to make more Chinese friends.
We will be honored if you can join us.
第五步:修改润色