Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你校的英国交换生Chris暑假要回国。他想要给他的好朋友买些有中国传统文化特色的礼物，希望你能给他些建议。请给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示荣幸；

2. 你的建议及理由；

3. 购物安排。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；

3.结束语已为你写好。

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Best regards,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Chris,

I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions, and of course, I’ m willing to help.

When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends, first I think you should know the meanings behind. For example, paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses. And Chinese knots can also make a good present, for they are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.

Since we both will be free next Sunday, why don’t you let me accompany you to have a look at Hong Qiao Market on that day? We can meet at 9 in the morning at the school gate and go there by subway. Does it sound okay for you? Write to me before this Friday, will you?

Best regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封建议信，帮助其挑选中国礼物。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式

首段：点明主题；

中心段：提建议；

尾段：提供帮助。

第二步：列提纲

Be delighted to; be interested in;be willing to; when it comes to; express your best wishes;

the symbol of family reunion; in the eyes of us Chinese.

第三步：连词成句

I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions.

I’ m willing to help.

When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends.

I think you should know the meanings behind.

Paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses.

Chinese knots can also make a good present.

They are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改