题目内容
4．定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
Dear Mike，
You said you want to know a lot about the English Club of our school．It was three years ago when the English Club was born．It was found to improve students'interest in English．Those interested in English got together in the multimedia classroom every Saturday afternoon．There are many activities holding in it．Students can watch variously English films．They can as well as learn to sing English songs，which can help them learn English word by heart．In addition，many topics can be discussed there in a language．How do you like our club？I'm looking forward to early reply．
Yours
Li Hua．
分析 本文主要讲述作者向Mike介绍自己学校的俱乐部情况．对英语感兴趣的学生每周六下午在俱乐部聚会，参加举办的各种活动，观看英语电影，用英语讨论很多话题等．
解答 Dear Mike，
You said you want to know a lot∧about the English Club of our school．It was three years ago when the English Club was born．It was found to improve students'interest in English．Those interested in English got together in the multimedia classroom every Saturday afternoon．There are many activities holding in it．Students can watch variously English films．They can as well as learn to sing English songs，which can help them learn English word by heart．In addition，many topics can be discussed there in a language．How do you like our club？I'm looking forward to∧early reply．
Yours
Li Hua．
详解：
1．加more 考查句意．根据句意：你说你想了解更多关于我们学校的英语俱乐部的情况．a lot more意为"更多"，是常用的表达．
2．when改为that 考查强调句．英语强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+that/who（当强调主语且主语指人）+其他部分．
3．found改为founded 考查动词语态．根据句意：建立这个俱乐部是为了提高学生对英语的兴趣．动词found是"建立"的意思，它的过去分词形式是founded．而过去分词found的原形是动词find"发现，找到"．
4．got改为get 考查动词时态．根据"every Saturday afternoon"可知，这里说的是现在的一般情况，用一般现在时．
5．holding改为held 考查过去分词．activities与hold之间是逻辑上的被动关系，应该用过去分词短语held in it作后置定语．
6．diversely改为diverse 考查形容词．English films是名词短语，要用形容词修饰作定语．
7．去掉as 考查词语用法．as well as是连词，连接并列的成分，as well充当副词，意为"也"，相当于too．
8．word改为words 考查名词复数．word在此处作"单词"讲，是可数名词，其前没有冠词、物主代词等限定词，要用复数形式．
9．a改为the 考查冠词．根据句意：此外，可以在这里用这种语言（即英语）讨论很多话题．此处的language是特指，而不是泛指．
10．加your 考查代词．根据句意：我期待你的尽早回复．根据语境，此处应是"你的尽早回复"，故要加上形容词性物主代词your以使语义更加明确．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
