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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was snowing heavily Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No. 601 to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in the bus. Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.

Answer 1

【答案】1.Monday前加on

2.at后面的the→a

3.waited→waiting

4.are→were

5.but→and/while

6.去掉been

7.we→they

8.passenger→passengers

9.hardly→hard

10.backward→forward

【解析】第一处：考查介词。具体的某一天上下午作时间状语，前面要加介词on。

第二处：考查冠词。bus stop意为“公共汽车站”，是可数名词，该处指“Li Hua在一个公共汽车站”，非特指，故要将the改为a。

第三处：考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，“waiting for Bus No. 601”是伴随状语，主语Li Hua和wait之间是主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。

第四处：考查时态。由上文可知，该句描述的是过去的事情，故该句应用过去时态，故把are改为were。

第五处：考查连词。句意：一些乘客在交谈，一些乘客看着窗外。两句话之间可视作并列关系或对比关系，故要将but改为and/while。

第六处：考查语态。break down意为“(车辆等)出故障”，是不及物动词短语，不用于被动语态，故应将been去掉。

第七处：考查代词。该处指“Li Hua and the other passengers”，故要用代词they代指他们，把we改为they。

第八处：考查名词。passenger是可数名词，该处指“其他的乘客们”，故应用名词复数形式。

第九处：考查副词。hard意为“努力地”；hardly意为“几乎不”。该处指乘客们努力地推车，故应将hardly改为hard。

第十处：考查句意理解。该处指向前推车，而不是向后推车，故应将backward改为forward。