题目内容
12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The strongest typhoon this year hit our city at the Mid-autumn Festival，which resulted from more than 10billion yuan of economic loss．I still remember the night when the typhoon strike the city．I was having a sound sleep while I heard the sound of a vase falling down．I was indeed frightening and worried about the windows in my room．Luckily，it were firm enough and just a little rainwater fell into my room．After while I felt the building was shaking and I had failed to fall asleep．In that tough night I could only hear the howling wind．How terrible!With musics playing，I finally fell asleep，wondering how it would be like in the coming morning．
分析 文章大意：今年最强劲的台风袭击了我们在中秋节的城市，造成了超过10亿元的经济损失，我还记得台风袭击城市的那晚，我在听到一个花瓶掉下来的声音，我感到很害怕，我很担心我的房间里的窗户，幸运的是，它还很结实，我还在担心我的房间里的窗户是那么的好，我的房间里有一些小的雨水，然后我感觉到大楼在摇晃，而我却没能睡着，在那个艰难的夜晚我只能听到呼啸的声音，我只能听到呼啸的声音，多么可怕!随着音乐的响起，我终于睡着了，想知道明天早上会怎么样．
解答 The strongest typhoon this year hit our city at the Mid-autumn Festival，which resulted from more than 10billion yuan of economic loss．I still remember the night when the typhoon strike the city．I was having a sound sleep while I heard the sound of a vase falling down．I was indeed frightening and worried about the windows in my room．Luckily，it were firm enough and just a little rainwater fell into my room．After∧while I felt the building was shaking and I had failed to fall asleep．In that tough night I could only hear the howling wind．How terrible!With musics playing，I finally fell asleep，wondering how it would be like in the coming morning．
详解：
1．from 改为 in，考查动词短语，result from"由…引起"result in"导致．此处为导致损失．
2．strike 改为 struck，考查时态，本句句意"我还记得台风袭击城市的那晚""袭击"应该用过去时．
3．while 改为 when，考查连词，此处用了句式"was doing sth…when sb．did"此句中did一般是不延续性动词，while从句的动词必须延续．
4．frightening 改为frightened，考查形容词，frightening"令人…害怕的"，frighteded"害怕的"
5．it 改为 they，考查代词，指代前句中windows，所以应该用they．
6．After 后加 a，考查固定搭配，"after a while""过了一会儿"．
7．去掉had，考查时态，过去完成时态应该表达过去的过去，而此处只表达过去，应该用一般过去时．
8．In 改为 On，考查介词辨析，在具体的某一天的晚上，用介词on．
9．musics改为 music，考查名词的数，music为不可数名词，没有复数形式．
10．how 改为 what，考查连接词，在宾语从句中，how作状语，what作主语或宾语，或表语，it would be like in the coming morning这个句子中缺少like de 宾语，所以用what．
点评 短文改错步骤：
1先通读全文．认真阅读短文，在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意．注意文章中上下文的逻辑关系是否正确，时态、人称、主谓、指代等是否一致．
2．聚焦出题热点、综合运用所学语言知识，分句（注意以句子为单位而不是以行为单位）对不同的错误情况进行分析和回答（即改词、加词或减词）．
3．再次通读全文，校对自己的改正是否正确．一般各种改错的方式都应该用到，如果出现了某一种改法（如加词、减词等）没有用到，要考虑自己的改错应该有问题，要对刚才不是很有把握的行进行推敲．在自己认为正确的行后划勾，并且校对其他行改正的符号是否准确，大小写是否拼写正确（这点同学们很容易忽视）．如果某一行有两种改错方式要推敲哪一种是最佳改法．
