题目内容
用英语写一篇150词左右的短文发表你的看法。
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.
There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.
In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill.
To solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.
【解析】
此文为说明文:首先,审题:时态,因为是说明的现状及自己的观点,所以用一般现在时为主。第一段:说明许多商品存在过度包装的这个现象,来引出话题。第二段:对其原因进行分析,从厂家和消费者双方的角度说明原因。第三段:说明自己对此现象的看法。最后一段:自己的建议。针对其原因,提出有针对性的解决办法。
【亮点分析】
文章分为四段,分述现存的一种社会现象—过度包装、过度包装的原因、自己的看法和改变现状的建议。层次分明,结构清晰。文中用到了像:phenomena,to name but a few,stimulate ,thus, mistakenly, delicate, disastrous consequences, restrict, raise one’s awareness, equal, advocate ,in my point of view等高级词汇和短语,使得文章表达准确、地道、流畅。
考点:考查提纲作文的写作
书面表达(满分25分)
学生之间是否应该在自习课上讨论问题? 你所在班级就此话题展开了讨论. 根据下列内容要点用英语写一篇150词左右的短文.
赞成:45% | 反对:55% | |
理 由 | 1. 可以更好地解决问题 2. 互相取长补短 | 1. 无法独立思考问题 2. 声音大,影响他人学习 |
你自己的观点:… (至少两点) | ||
Should We Study by Talking in Self-study Classes?
Lately our class has had a discussion on whether we should study by talking in self-study
classes. Views vary(变化)from person to person.
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书面表达(满分25分)
学生之间是否应该在自习课上讨论问题? 你所在班级就此话题展开了讨论. 根据下列内容要点用英语写一篇150词左右的短文.
赞成:45% |
反对:55% |
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理 由 |
1. 可以更好地解决问题 2. 互相取长补短 |
1. 无法独立思考问题 2. 声音大,影响他人学习 |
你自己的观点:… (至少两点) |
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注意:文章标题和开头已给出,但不计入总词数。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Should We Study by Talking in Self-study Classes?
Lately our class has had a discussion on whether we should study by talking in self-study
classes. Views vary(变化)from person to person.
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高中学习任务繁重,因此同学们对于参加学校活动有着不同的看法,请以“Taking Part in School Activities”为题,根据下表提示,并结合自己的见闻,用英语写一篇150词左右的短文(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
现象与看法 |
观点与理由 |
许多同学对参加学校活动很感兴趣 |
1. 从课本上学习并不是唯一的任务,应该抓住每个机会来获得实践知识 2. 长时间学习之后,筋疲力尽,可以通过参加学校活动来放松自己 3. 有更多机会与人交流,结交更多朋友 |
不少同学不愿参加学校活动 |
1. 应该充分利用时间来学习,提高学习成绩 2. 学校活动与他们未来的发展没关系 |
我的看法 |
…..(两点) |
Taking Part in School Activities
The study burden tends to be heavier and heavier for high school students. So they hold different views about whether they should take part in school activities.
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