Question

高中学习任务繁重，因此同学们对于参加学校活动有着不同的看法，请以“Taking Part in School Activities”为题，根据下表提示，并结合自己的见闻，用英语写一篇150词左右的短文（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。

现象与看法	观点与理由
许多同学对参加学校活动很感兴趣	1. 从课本上学习并不是唯一的任务，应该抓住每个机会来获得实践知识 2. 长时间学习之后，筋疲力尽，可以通过参加学校活动来放松自己 3. 有更多机会与人交流，结交更多朋友
不少同学不愿参加学校活动	1. 应该充分利用时间来学习，提高学习成绩 2. 学校活动与他们未来的发展没关系
我的看法	…..(两点)

                      Taking Part in School Activities

The study burden tends to be heavier and heavier for high school students. So they hold different views about whether they should take part in school activities.

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Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Taking Part in School Activities

The study burden tends to be heavier and heavier for high school students. So they hold different views about whether they should take part in school activities.

Many students are very interested in school activities. Firstly, they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task and that they should take every chance to get some practical knowledge. Secondly, they often feel worn out after long hours of study, so they can relax by taking part in school activities. Above all, by taking part in various activities they can broaden / widen their horizons and have more chances to communicate with others, learn team spirit and make more friends.

However, a large group of students show little interest in school activities and spend most of their time on studies. They believe that they should take full advantage of time to study because achieving good examination results is their major concern at present. In addition, school activities have little to do with their future development and careers .

In my opinion, I prefer the first view. On one hand, we can learn a great deal from other students that we meet in activities. On the other hand, the modern society requires many qualities of young people , so only learning from textbooks is not enough.

【解析】

试题分析：英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。比如viewpoints，effective，strengthen，what they have learned in class，whether a training class or tutor is needed just depends。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。比如First of all，…Secondly,…

Besides,…. For one thing, …For another,…What’s more,