Question

2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom邀请你寒假去美国玩，但你不能应邀前往．请你围绕以下要点给Tom 写封邮件：
1．春节是与家人团聚的日子，不想独自出游；
2．高考临近，想利用这个寒假参加辅导班（tutorial classes），补习自己的弱势学科；
3．高考结束后可以去美国游玩，希望Tom能够做自己的导游．
注意：1．词数：150-180；
      2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文为对方邀请自己去美国度寒假的回信，要说明不能去的原因，解释清楚和委婉的表达歉意以及再约时间的意愿．审题步骤：1）体裁：书信；2）话题：道歉+计划3）要点：材料提供的三个要点4）段落划分及要点分布：段一/套话+背景+目的；段二/交代前两个要点（一定要展开论述）；段三/计划+请求原谅的套话．根据文章内容可知时态应用一般现在时，人称用第一人称．
重要短语：
regret to do sth遗憾的做某事；As far as sb be concerned就某人个人而言；prefer to do rather than do sth与做某事相比更愿意做另外一件事； First of all 首先；What's more而且；take sth into consideration将…考虑在内；attend some tutorial classes参加辅导班
高分句型：
1．it's the coming of the Spring Festival that makes me prefer to stay at home rather than take a travel to America．这是一个强调句型，强调的是句子的主语部分the coming of the Spring Festival．
2．So significant is it to me that I will attend some tutorial classes during this winter holiday for some of my weak divisions．本句为so+形容词位于句首引起倒装的结构，that引导的为一个结果状语从句．
3．I will appreciate it if you can be my guide at the time．本句中含有if引导的宾语从句，作动词appreciate的宾语，而且appreciate后面的代词it不能省略，it只是一个谦词，在句中无实意．

解答 Dear Tom，
      It's a long time since we met last time and I miss you very much．Thanks for your invitation．However，I regret to tell you that I can't travel to America this winter holiday for some unavoidable reasons．（表明态度）
     First of all，it's the coming of the Spring Festival that makes me prefer to stay at home rather than take a travel to America．（高分句型）As far as we Chinese are concerned，the Spring Festival is a family time treasured by us all．What's more，the College Entrance Examination is coming．So significant is it to me that I will attend some tutorial classes during this winter holiday for some of my weak divisions．（高分句型）Taking all the above factors into consideration，I have to say sorry again．（陈述理由）
Anyway，shall I make it after the Exam？I will appreciate it if you can be my guide at the time．（高分句型）（表达愿望）
     Yours
     Li Hua

点评 总之，书信类的写作要注意认真分析所给的信息提示，准确审题，灵活运用所学英语知识，采用不同个表达方式将要点表达清楚．在叙述事件或者陈述理由的过程中，以具体事例为例，以增强文章的说服力，适时使用一些过渡语和高级句子以提高文章的档次．