Question

【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is a joke of the fire alarm. When Sophie was cleaning the blackboard after his class ended last night, the fire alarm went off. The alarm was sounded like the busy signal on the phone, but 1,000 times loud. Instead of leave the building, she walked about to see that the problem was. The school seemed to be empty. Then she walked by one room, but saw about seven students inside. She told everyone to leave immediate, and after almost five minutes, both of them left the building. Then a school police office arrived the school and walked around the area. He said it was a false alarm and used his key to turn down the alarm.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his---her

【2】去掉was

【3】loud改为louder

【4】leave改为leaving

【5】that改为what

【6】but改为and

【7】immediate改为immediately

【8】both改为all

【9】arrived后加at

【10】down改为off

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一个关于火警的笑话。

【1】his---her根据Sophie可知是女性，故把his---her。

【2】去掉was sound听起来，是不及物动词，故去掉was。

【3】loud改为louder 句意：大1000倍，用比较级，故把loud改为louder。

【4】leave改为leavingInstead of后跟名词或动名词，故把leave改为leaving。

【5】that改为what see后面是一个宾语从句，宾语从句缺少引导词，缺少表语，故把that改为what。

【6】but改为and 句意：他步行经过一个房间，看见七个学生在里面。此处是递进关系，而不是转折关系，故把but改为and。

【7】immediate改为immediately 副词修饰动词，故把immediate改为immediately。

【8】both改为all 因为前面提到是七个学生，故把both改为all。

【9】arrived后加at arrive at+小地点；arrive in+大地点，“到达学校”，故在arrived后加at。

【10】down改为off 固定词组：turn off关掉；turn down拒绝。“关掉警报器”，故把down改为off。

【知识归纳】

1.以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly；immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively

2. turn短语

in turn 轮流，依次；turn off 关掉，关闭；拐弯，使转变方向；turn into v. 变成；进入；turn on 打开，发动；turn out 生产；结果是；关掉；出动；驱逐；turn over 移交给；翻阅；把…翻过来；发动；营业额达到；反复考虑； turn in 交上；归还；拐入；告发；[口]上床睡觉 ；turn up 出现；发生；开大；发现；卷起；使仰卧；turn out to be 结果是；原来是；turn down 拒绝；向下转折 ；turn away 避开；解雇；不准…入内；走开；转过脸 ；turn round 转身，转向；归航；回车道；转变。