题目内容
【题目】最近,你们学校开展了以“中国梦”为主题的系列活动。你参加了其中的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇题为 “My Chinese Dream”的演讲稿。内容要点如下:
1. 你对中国梦的畅想;
2. 你能为实现中国梦做出哪些努力。
注意:
1. 总词数不少于100;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “My Chinese Dream”.
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
【答案】
When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.
Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.
【解析】
试题分析:最近,你们学校开展了以“中国梦”为主题的系列活动。你参加了其中的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇题为 “My Chinese Dream”的演讲稿。内容要点如下:1. 你对中国梦的畅想;2. 你能为实现中国梦做出哪些努力。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1. 总词数不少于100;2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇演讲稿,语言简练,层次分明,结构严谨,布局合理,并运用高级句子。When someone asks me:使用时间状语从句;The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. Why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句堪称经典;to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me.动词不定式做主语;I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.宾语从句用在句中;We should do our best to make our dream come true.两个动词不定式的使用很是巧妙;另外,as possible as I can. Thanks to the doctors, From then on,的运用为文章增色添彩。