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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For many people, music has always been part of life, and they listen to music on radio, on iPod and on Internet. As is vividly showing in the picture, the music fan is trying to download songs he enjoys. But the website requires payment first every time he wanted to download something, that annoys him. How he wishes the music is all free!

Many people are used to free music being downloaded from the Internet without realizing they have done harm for others’ right. Music artists work very hardly to compose music. If not paid, he will lose enthusiasm to go ahead, and gradually we will find beautiful musics nowhere.

Answer 1

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【解析】考查定冠词。在网络上on the Internet。故加定冠词the。

考查非谓语动词。句意：正如图片展示的…，情景被展示，故使用过去分词，故将showing改为showed或shown。

考查动词时态。文章使用一般现在时描述，故将wanted改为wants。

考查定语从句。非限制性定语从句不能由that引导，只能由which引导。故将that改为which。

考查过去分词作定语。Downloaded过去分词作定语，表示被动，故将being去掉。

考查虚拟语气。与现在事实相反，应使用一般过去时，故将is改为were。

考查固定短语。Do harmful to对…有害。故将介词for改为to。

考查副词。Hardly几乎不；hard副词，努力地。故将hardly改为hard。

考查代词。句意：如果不支付，他们将失去热情。此处他们指音乐艺术家。故将he改为they。

考查名词单复数。music为不可数名词，故将musics改为music。