题目内容
【题目】书面表达
As a well-known doctor in London, John Snow was willing to help ordinary people上周一，一个福建医学院大学的李教授针对“青少年意外伤害自救能力的现状与建议”做了一次两个小时的报告。请根据以下提示内容，写一篇短文：
1. 意外伤害的发生呈逐年上升的趋势。在中国，每年约有20万少年儿童死于意外伤害。意外伤害已经成为青少年健康的“第一杀手”；
2. 青少年对急救知识缺乏了解；
3. 建议加强青少年对意外伤害急救的教育。
注意：
1. 词数100-120；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：医科大学 Medical University；意外伤害accidental injury；自救self rescue
Last Monday,
【答案】
Last Monday, Professor Li from Fujian Medical University gave us a report on teenagers’ accidental injury and self rescue. The report lasted two hours.
Professor Li said that the rate of accidental injury is increasing year by year. In China, about 200,000 children die of accidental injury each year. Accidental injury has become the leading cause of death for teenagers. However, most teenagers lack the basic knowledge of first aid. In fact a knowledge of first aid can really make a real difference.
At the end of the report, Professor Li called on us to realize the importance of gaining the first aid knowledge. He said that it was high time that we teenagers received education on first aid.
【解析】
试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语die of 死于；first aid急救；make a real difference有真正的影响；At the end of在。。结束处；Professor Li said that the rate of accidental injury is increasing year by year.这个句子运用到that引导的宾语从句；He said that it was high time that we teenagers received education on first aid这个句子运用到it is high time that 就是做某事的时候这个句型；
