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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Alice, my closest friend, devotes many energy to her lessons all day long. She is always one of the top student in our class. She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy some pop songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons. As an enthusiastic volunteer, she has successful organized varieties of voluntary activities. We paid visit to a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed by the staff in the home. Win honour for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文介绍了作者最好的朋友Alice是一个品学兼优的好学生。

考查词的用法。energy是不可数名词，用much来修饰，所以many改成much。

考查固定结构。One of + 可数名词的复数形式，表示“……中的一个”，所以student改成students。

考查时态。表示主语现在的状态，用一般现在时，所以made改成makes。

考查代词。Alice总是愿意帮助其他人。表示“其他人”，所以other改成others。

考查副词。修饰动词organized，用副词，所以successful改成successfully。

考查固定短语。pay a visit to参观，是固定短语，所以paid后加a。

考查连词。上个月我们参观了敬老院，并且在敬老院附近捡拾了一些垃圾。表示并列关系，所以so改成and。

考查主语从句。what we did是一个主语从句，引导词在从句中作did的宾语，所以that改成what。

考查非谓语动词。Win与其逻辑主语Alice之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以win改成winning。