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9．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分．
One day when I was about to playing football，I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash or a bucket to carry water．I thought Mother was very tiring，so I decided to help her wash the clothes．While I was doing the washing，Li Ming came and asked me to play football with himself．I refused him and told him that I will help Mother finish the houseworks first．When I got the housework done，I was very exhausted that I was sweating all over．
When Mother came back to home，she found I had washed all the dirty clothes．She gladly said that I was good child．I felt very happily．

分析 本文主要讲述作者帮母亲做家务的事情．当作者帮母亲洗衣服时，李明来要作者和他一起踢足球，他都拒绝了．当母亲回家时，发现作者洗了所有的脏衣服，很是高兴．

解答 One day when I was about to playing football，I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash or a bucket to carry water．I thought Mother was very tiring，so I decided to help her wash the clothes．While I was doing the washing，Li Ming came and asked me to play football with himself．I refused him and told him that I will help Mother finish the houseworks first．When I got the housework done，I was very exhausted that I was sweating all over．
When Mother came back to home，she found I had washed all the dirty clothes．She gladly said that I was∧good child．I felt very happily．
详解：
1．playing改为play 考查词语用法．be about to do sth．意为"刚要做某事，即将做某事"，是固定搭配．
2．or改为and 考查连词．a lot of dirty clothes to wash和a bucket to carry water是并列结构，用连词and．
3．tiring改为tired 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
4．himself改为him 考查代词．根据句意：李明来要我和他一起踢足球．用代词him．
5．will改为would 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用过去将来时态．
6．houseworks改为housework 考查名词．housework是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
7．very改为so 考查固定句型．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
8．去掉to 考查词语用法．home是副词，其前不需要介词to．
9．加a 考查冠词．child是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
10．happily改为happy 考查形容词．feel是连系动词，后接形容词作表语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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