Question

【题目】假定你是李华，高考来临之际，你写信给美国的也即将高中毕业并面临考试压力的笔友John。要点如下：

1.表达问候和理解；

2.憧憬大学生活；

3.考前鼓励。

注意：

1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dcar John,

How are you lately? With graduation drawing near, you are undoubtedly under massive stress. At this critical moment, I just want to let you know you are not alone.

When you are really mentally and physically exhausted, picture the wonderful university life ahead of you. In class, we will be sitting in a huge fully-packed hall, enjoying the pleasure of being enlightened by world-class professors. After class, a large amount of time will be at our disposal.

Difficulties will in time pass away, and all we need to do is hold fast to our dreams and trust ourselves. Best wishes.

Yours

Liu Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，高考来临之际，你写信给美国的也即将高中毕业并面临考试压力的笔友John。要点如下：1.表达问候和理解；2.憧憬大学生活；3.考前鼓励。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：graduation (毕业)；undoubtedly (毫无疑问)；under massive stress (在巨大的压力下)；critical(决定性的)；mentally and physically (心理和生理)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。