Question

【题目】短文改错

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school, I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so serious overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. To my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Entered → Entering

【2】eat → ate

【3】serious → seriously

【4】It → What

【5】去掉a

【6】now → then

【7】avoiding → avoid

【8】off → up

【9】until → before

【10】I 前加did

【解析】

【1】本句的谓语是took,所以enter属于非谓语，而且主语I与动词enter之间是主动关系，所以用它的现在分词。故答案为Entered 改为 Entering。

【2】根据前面的谓语took可知此处应该用动词的过去式。故答案为eat 改为 ate 。

【3】此处需要副词修饰后面的形容词。故答案为serious 改为seriously。

【4】本句中的主语从句中缺少主语，而且是连词引导主语从句。故答案为 It 改为What。

【5】make fun of是固定短语，意思是取笑。故答案为去掉a。

【6】根据句意，应该是从那时起。故答案为now 改为 then。

【7】make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心作某事。故答案为avoiding改为avoid。

【8】take up从事; take off脱掉；根据句意，此处表示从事慢走来减肥。故答案为off 改为 up。

【9】it was not long before…是固定句式，意思是没有多久就……。故答案为until 改为 before 。

【10】only加副词防于句首，句子部分倒装，即把助动词或是be动词或是情态动词放在主语前。故答案为在I 前加did。