Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Peter给你发邮件，表示想了解有关中国谚语(Chinese proverbs)的知识及其学习方法。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1. 中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验，口头传承)；

2. 中国谚语的特点(简短而富有意义)

3. 实用的学习方法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am delighted to have received your email. Knowing that want to learn about Chinese proverbs and their learning methods. I am writing to tell you something about them.

As part of the traditional Chinese culture. Chinese proverbs are summaries of people’s wisdom and experience. They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by people and are passed on orally generation by generation. As for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I suggest that you find some relevant materials online, which may give you specific explanations. Additionally, it is beneficial to recite the proverbs every day, and you can apply them to communicating with Chinese people around you.

I sincerely hope the above can be of some help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向外国朋友介绍有关中国谚语的知识和学习方法。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表明邮件意图

2. 介绍中国谚语

1）中国谚语的由来

2）中国谚语的特点

3. 介绍学习方法

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Chinese proverbs；learn about；learning method；traditional Chinese culture；wisdom and experience；pass on；orally；meaningful

第三步：连词成句

1. Glad to know you want to learn about Chinese proverbs.

2. Let me make an introduction of it and its learning method.

3. Chinese proverbs are summaries of people’s wisdom and experience and they are part of traditional Chinese culture.

4. Chinese proverbs are brief but meaningful generally.

5. They are passed on orally generation by generation.

6. If you are looking for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I’d recommend you find some information on the Internet.

7. Hope these things that I say can help.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改