Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在观看《中国汉语桥》Chinese Bridge Contest节目时，决定学习中国语言文化，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；

2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；

3．和中国朋友多沟通。

注意：1. 词数不少于100字。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack，

I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture. I’d like to offer you some proposals, which I think can be of benefit to your Chinese study.

To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon. Besides，watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning. Last but not least，you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently. Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.

I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study and that you will make greater progress in it.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信，给英国朋友Jack就如何学习中国语言文化给出一些建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；

2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；

3．和中国朋友多沟通。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be interested in; Chinese Bridge Contest; Chinese language and culture; proposal; be of benefit to; classical literature; Tb programs; be supposed to do; communicate with; make progress.

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.

2. I’d like to offer you some proposals,

3 To learn the Chinese language and culture well， you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.

4. Watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.

5. You are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently

6. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least;

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改