题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Alan在邮件中提到他近来对中国古诗很感兴趣,希望你介绍一位你喜欢的古代诗人。请给他回信,内容包括:
1.该诗人是谁;
2.该诗人的主要贡献;
3.该诗人的作品给你的感受
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alan,
It's great to hear from you. And I feel very proud knowing your interest in the classical Chinese poetry.
Personally, I do like Li Bai, a typical romantic poet from the Tang dynasty and crowned as Fairy Poet. Believe it or not, he has left us nearly 1,000 compositions, many of which still enjoy great popularity today including his Quiet Night Thoughts. Head up, I watch the moon; Head down, I think of home? So vivid are the descriptions that I can't help picturing the scene in my mind. While reading. his magnificent masterpieces, I usually feel free, energetic and confident or sad, lonely and isolated. To be frank, it is the emotions presented in his poems that touch me most.
Interested in him? Want some books of him? Just let me know. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以学生李华的身份给英国笔友Alan回信,介绍一位你喜欢的古代诗人。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
1.该诗人是谁;
2.该诗人的主要贡献;
3.该诗人的作品给你的感受
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
crowned as ;great popularity; can't help picturing
第三步:连词成句
1.Personally, I do like Li Bai, a typical romantic poet from the Tang dynasty and crowned as Fairy Poet.
2.Believe it or not, he has left us nearly 1,000 compositions, many of which still enjoy great popularity today
3.So vivid are the descriptions that I can't help picturing the scene in my mind.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:提出喜爱的诗人;诗人的主要贡献;诗人作品所给的感觉
2. 表示并列补充关系:Personally;Believe it or not;To be frank
第五步:润色修改