题目内容
【题目】你班将于12月24日下午1点在学校礼堂(auditorium)举行圣诞汇演。假如你是班长,请你根据以下要点用英语在班级QQ群里发一则通知,布置相关事宜。
内容包括:
1. 每个同学准备一个才艺节目;
2. 积极参加游戏;
3. 做文明观众
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Boys and girls,
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Boys and girls,
With the Christmas approaching, an English party will be held in the school auditorium at 1 p.m. on 24th December.
Everybody is required to show your talents, so you need to prepare an English program in advance. Different programs are welcomed at the party, such as singing, dancing, humorous stories and so on. Besides, we have designed some games, hoping you will take an active part in them. You will get a big surprise by winning a game.
Please get there on time. While watching the performance, please mind your behaviors. Do remember to take your litter away when the party is over.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一则通知。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一则通知;你班将于12月24日下午1点在学校礼堂(auditorium)举行圣诞汇演,你以班长的身份用英语在班级QQ群里发一则通知,布置相关事宜;内容包括:每个同学准备一个才艺节目,积极参加游戏,做文明观众,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:an English party(一场英语聚会),the school auditorium(学校礼堂),show your talents(展示你的才艺),in advance(提前),take an active part in(积极参加),mind your behaviors(注意言行举止)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如with复合结构With the new year approaching, an English party will be held in the school auditorium at 7p.m. on 30th December.;非谓语动词的运用Besides, we have designed some games, hoping you will take an active part in them.;状语从句的省略While watching the performance, please mind your behaviors.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。