Question

12．假定你是李华，英语课上你们班级就"好朋友的选择标准"展开讨论，结果如图所示．请你根据思路图提示的内容，写一篇英语短文，总结讨论结果，并谈谈自己的看法．
注意：
1、根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；
2、词数：120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息就"好朋友的选择标准"展开讨论，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从身心健康，同甘共苦，有共同的兴趣爱好和真诚礼貌几个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
 Most people think that only a person who is good at studying is a good student．（高分句型）
On the one  hand，a healthy body gives a student courage in the face of difficulties and danger，while on the other hand a sound spirit means that a student is able to challenges．（高分句型）
In short，I think students should be judged based on all the criteria we have for judging a human being，not just on their grades．（高分句型）

解答 Most people think that only a person who is good at studying is a good student．（高分句型）But I don't completely agree．The standard of a good student should not only be his or her marks，but also the following aspects．
    First of all，it's important to have a healthy body and a sound spirit．On the one  hand，a healthy body gives a student courage in the face of difficulties and danger，while on the other hand a sound spirit means that a student is able to challenges．（高分句型）Besides，a good student should also be creative，quick to learn，polite to his or her teachers and parents，and have other good qualities．
   In short，I think students should be judged based on all the criteria we have for judging a human being，not just on their grades．（高分句型）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．