Question

下面是对中学生对志愿者工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的信息写一篇英语小短文讨论中学生是否应该参加志愿者活动（voluntary work）。题目自拟，字数100左右。

70%的学生赞成参加志愿者活动	为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良好的交际能力和领导才能
25%的学生不愿意从事志愿者活动	无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习
5%的学生无明确态度	漠不关心

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Possible version:

Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.

70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contribution to society and that it is a worthwhile job to help others. It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up confidence, self-awareness, good communication skills and leadership ability.

25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students don’t have clear attitudes towards it, nor do they care about it.

I think each of us should make a contribution to society. No matter how small it is, it will help make a difference.

Peter

【解析】

试题分析：拿到作文题目，首先要认真审题，这是一篇提纲作文，下面是对中学生对志愿者工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的信息写一篇英语小短文讨论中学生是否应该参加志愿者活动（voluntary work）。所以要用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经以表格形式给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数100词左右。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。