Question

【题目】目前，食品安全问题引起了人们的广泛关注。一些生产厂商为了降低成本追求利润，缺乏足够的安全措施，致使一些劣质或有害食品流入市场，对人们的健康产生了极大的危害。请你就此事给一家英文报刊写封信，谈谈个人看法并呼吁整个社会关注此事。

要求：词数100左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：利润profit；安全措施safety measures。

Dear Sir,

I'm writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir.

I’m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.Some food companies don't take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality so as to reduce the cost and make more profits.As a consequence,more and more low-quality food flows into the market,which does a lot of harm to consumer's health.

From my point of view,food is vital to human beings.We can not live without proper food.If we pay no attention to food safety,the health of the whole nation would suffer.So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food.Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】1.这是一篇命题作文。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.这封信件主要是描述一下食品安全问题（以题干描述为基础），写出个人看法并呼吁社会关注，所以通篇以一般现在时为主。

2.注意把信件内容写全。动笔之前可以列个提纲，先写什么，后写什么，可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅。

3.注意语气。语气应该比较恳切，有说服力，因为无论是描述食品安全的现状还是表达自己的观点，最终目的都是呼吁大家关注这一问题。

【范文亮点】：1.Some food companies don't take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality so as to reduce the cost and make more profits.一些食品公司为了减少成本，赚取更多利润，没有采取必要的安全措施保证食品安全。（加分短语的使用：take measures,so as to,make profits; 采用了以so as to连接的复合句）

2.As a consequence,more and more low-quality food flows into the market,which does a lot of harm to consumer's health.因此，越来越多低质量的食品流入市场，这对消费者的健康造成了很大伤害。（连接词as a consequence的使用，使得句与句之间更加流畅; 采用了以which引导的非限制性定语从句）

3.Only in this way can we live a healthier life.只有用这种方法我们才可以有更健康的生活。（采用了倒装句，“only+句子状语”位于句首句子要部分倒装）