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8.假定你是李华,你校外教Smith任教期满即将回国,你们班同学将于明晚7点至9点在校礼堂为其举办一场特别的聚会.请你代表全班同学给Smith老师发一封电子邮件,邀请他参加.
注意:1.字数80左右(开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Smith,
We are all sorry to hear that you will leave our school.                                .
We are looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文,根据提示信息你校外教Smith任教期满即将回国,你们班同学将于明晚7点至9点在校礼堂为其举办一场特别的聚会.请你代表全班同学给Smith老师发一封电子邮件,邀请他参加,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写..3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:On behalf of代表;enable sb to do sth使某人能够做某事;make a great difference to 对…有很大影响;Besides另外;look forward to 盼望;
On behalf of my classmates,I appreciate all you have done to improve our English and to enable us to learn more about the outside world.(高分句型一)
To show our great love for you,we're planning a special gathering,and I sincerely hope that you won't miss it.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Smith,
      We are sorry to hear that you will leave our school.On behalf of my classmates,I appreciate all you have done to improve our English and to enable us to learn more about the outside world.(高分句型一)You have really made a great difference to our lives.
      To show our great love for you,we're planning a special gathering,and I sincerely hope that you won't miss it.(高分句型二)It'll be held from seven to nine tomorrow evening at the school hall.Besides,we have prepared some interesting programs for the party.I am ready to help you with your luggage and take you to the airport.So don't hesitate to tell me in advance if you need.
      We are looking forward to seeing you.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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