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9．假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack通过E-mail询问你的暑假计划．请你从下面的网站广告中选择一项你暑假要参加的活动，作为你的假期安排，并对Jack说明理由（至少三条）

注意：1．可适当增加细节使行文连贯．2．字数100字左右．3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
Now I'd like to share my plan for the summer holiday with you．Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country．（高分句型一）I have always dreamed of being a volunteer，because I'd like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it．（高分句型二）Besides，volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture．（高分句型三）Most importantly，I can exchange ideas with the local people and make them know more about China．
So I'm eager to join in the activity and I'm sure I will benefit greatly from it．How about your plan for this summer holiday？．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack通过E-mail询问你的暑假计划．请你从下面的网站广告中选择一项你暑假要参加的活动，作为你的假期安排，并对Jack说明理由，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Recently 最近；become interested in 对…感兴趣； make up my mind to do下定决心去做某事；dream of 梦想；Besides另外；Most importantly更重要的是；join in参加；benefit  from从…中受益
Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country．（高分句型一）
I have always dreamed of being a volunteer，because I'd like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it．（高分句型二）
Besides，volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
Now I'd like to share my plan for the summer holiday with you．
Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country．（高分句型一）I have always dreamed of being a volunteer，because I'd like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it．（高分句型二）Besides，volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture．（高分句型三）Most importantly，I can exchange ideas with the local people and make them know more about China．
So I'm eager to join in the activity and I'm sure I will benefit greatly from it．How about your plan for this summer holiday？
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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