题目内容
应某英文报纸的邀请,你们班开展一次关于友谊的讨论――假如你正在复习功课,你的一个朋友请你陪他上街购物,你去还是不去?你的同学李磊和汤姆的观点截然不同。请你根据下表中的观点,用英语写一篇短文,给该英文报投稿。
李磊的观点 | 1. 是朋友就不能拒绝其要求; 2. 为朋友即使学习有所影响,也没有关系。 |
汤姆的观点 | 1. 朋友的要求也不能都答应; 2. 学习比购物更重要。 |
你的观点 | …… |
注意:1. 词数120左右
2. 文章的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
Recently, we have had a discussion on the question: “Would you go shopping with your friend at his request while you are going over your lessons?
Dear Sir,
Recently, we have had a discussion on the question: “Would you go shopping with your friend at his request while you are going over your lessons?”
My classmates Li Lei and Tom have different viewpoints. Li Lei thinks that he can’t refuse his friend’s request even though his studies will be affected. Good friends should try their best to do whatever they are asked to do and it is not important whether his studies will be affected. Friendship comes first. But Tom thinks oppositely. He says he won’t meet all requests from his friends. Shopping can be done in spare time. As students, studying is more important than shopping.
In my opinion, either Li Lei or Tom is right to some extent. We may meet our friends’ request, but that depends. If we have difficulties, we should let them know.
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求根据“假如你正在复习功课,你的一个朋友请你陪他上街购物,你去还是不去?”这个问题所产生的不同该观点写一篇短文,给某英文报投稿。李磊的观点是1. 是朋友就不能拒绝其要求;2. 为朋友即使学习有所影响,也没有关系;汤姆的观点是1. 朋友的要求也不能都答应; 2. 学习比购物更重要;并且写出你自己的观点。词数在120词左右,注意文章的格式已给出,不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识:宾语从句whatever they are asked to do;时间状语从句while you are going over your lessons;让步状语从句even though his studies will be affected. whether his studies will be affected.等,语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰;
范文注意使用了现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情,对时态有较好的把握;
范文使用了很多固定短语:go shopping,try one’s best to do,ask sb to do sth , meet requests,In my opinion。等,使作文内容更加充实;
范文注意使用Li Lei thinks,But Tom thinks oppositely.,In my opinion等来衔接句子和段落,表示每个人不同d观点,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯。
考点:议论类作文
Below is a passage adapted from the network edition of China Daily.
Event
Li Yang, one of China’s most famous English teachers, apologized for beating his American wife more than a week after she posted photos of her injuries on the web and set off a bomb of criticism. “I wholeheartedly apologize to my wife Kim and my girls for committing domestic violence. This has caused them serious physical and mental damage,” Li said on his microblog at Weibo.com, the country’s most popular social media site, on Saturday. Li, 42, is a mechanics major but is best known for his “Crazy English,” a popular method of language learning that involves yelling at the top of one’s lungs. He was at the center of public criticism after his wife Kim Lee put up posts on the web accusing him of abuse, showing her swollen forehead and knees. |
Voices
@Xuemanzi, angel investor Anti-domestic violence laws should be made as soon as possible, giving protection to the rights of women and children lawfully. Police should not stand back from domestic violence any longer, even if no one reports them. Society, as a whole, should attach greater importance to the crime. @Zhangxiaomei Chinese are never taught about marital(婚姻的) relations, which mean not merely living together. A good marriage needs to overcome three differences: family background, gender and personalities. In addition to these, there is cultural gap in Li Yang’s case. If the effects of these differences are not well understood, after the honeymoon period, they will turn into conflicts and endanger the marriage. Li’s domestic violence is a reminder that China needs such education. @Wuxiaolong, Sina Weibo user Li Yang’s choice to resort to domestic violence really reflects his character. Students who have attended his Crazy English Camp may know what I mean: Li wants his students to worship him as an idol. I still remember he once had his students kowtow(叩头) to him. He always teaches English by imposition(权威强制), which directly reflects his desire for power. @Sikaozhe, Sina Weibo user In the US, the punishments for domestic violence are even more severe than stealing. If the police arrive at the wife’s call during a fighting between a couple and find injuries on her, they will immediately arrest the husband. Even if the wife doesn’t call the police, they may also show up as neighbors could well do their part. @ykxin Sina Weibo User Don’t blindly worship anyone, because in every closet there may hide a skeleton. As a famous Chinese saying goes, “Only they who do well in their daily routine tasks can fulfills their dreams on great occasions”. Not surprisingly, one who focuses too much on his career and ignores his family, like Li Yang, will fail in both. Don’t judge a person by his career success, wealth, or any other material aspect, because what finally decides a person is his character. |
Aftermath(余波)
Although Li Yang publicly apologized to his wife, promising to love his daughters even if he and Lee divorce, the damage, perhaps permanently, has been done to his wife, his three daughters and the whole family. Wang Xingjuan, founder of the Maple Women’s Psychological Consulting Center, a non-profit organization, said nearly half of domestic violence abusers are people who have higher education, senior jobs and social status. She said this was probably because such people were usually under more mental stress. |
1.This passage is focused on Li Yang’s .
A.microblog article
B.domestic violence
C.English-teaching career
D.international marriage
2.Zhangxiaomei holds the view that .
A.laws should be passed to protect women and children
B.crazy personality accounts for violence and ill temper
C.overcoming background gap is necessary for marriage
D.Li is wrong to have his students worship him as an idol
3.Who thinks that character plays the most important role in one’s life?
A.@Xuemanzi B.@Sikaozhe
C.@ykxin D.@Zhangxiaomei
4.According to Wang Xingjuan, .
A.people of higher education won’t easily lose temper
B.people under stress tend to have domestic violence
C.people in lower social status often beat their wives
D.people with senior jobs seldom have family trouble