题目内容
7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分．
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live．Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area．It is always crowded with customers at meal times．Some people even had to wait outside．My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest．Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking．My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time．Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady．
分析 本文主要讲述我叔叔的餐饮在本地很受欢迎．主要是他诚信经营，比如，蔬菜新鲜，食用油保证品质等．
解答 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live．Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area．It is always crowded with customers at meal times．Some people even had to wait outside．My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest．Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking．My uncle says that he never dreams∧becoming rich in the short period of time．Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady．
1．that改为where 考查连词．引导词where在宾语从句中充当地点状语．
2．去掉but 考查连词．从属连词though与并列连词but不可以连用．
3．had改为have 考查动词时态．根据上下文可知整篇文章描述的是现在的一般性情况，应该用一般现在时．
4．honest改为honesty 考查形容词．is后接形容词作表语．
5．or改为and 考查连词．fresh vegetables和high quality oil都需要使用，而不是二选一，用连词and．
6．using改为used 考查动词语态．此处表示被动含义，be used for意为"被用来去做"．
7．加of 考查词语用法．"dream of doing sth．意为"梦想做某事"，是固定搭配．
8．the改为a 考查冠词．根据上下文可知，句子意思为"在一段短暂的时间内"，并没有特指在哪一段时间．
9．our改为his 考查代词．his指代my uncle．
10．stead改为steadily 考查副词．grow不是连第动词，意为"发展"，要用副词修饰．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
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