题目内容
【题目】书面表达
目前，街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗，对此你们班同学们组织了一场讨论：城市内是否可以饲养宠物。根据下表所提供的信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。
支持饲养宠物 | 反对饲养宠物 | 你的观点 |
1． 安慰孤寡老人 2． 人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣 | 1． 造成环境污染 2． 吵闹声，甚至伤人 | …… |
注意：1．词数100左右。2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。
3．开头语已为你写好。
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think it’s a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
I like animals, so I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment or causing other troubles.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇属于提纲作文。提纲作文写作要领：
第一步：审题：审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。审好题会让我们做到“磨刀不误砍柴工”；第二步：抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲：写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全；第三步：选词组句：
在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来；第四步：连句成篇：根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来。
【亮点说明】本篇要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，句子简洁明了，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如句型recently we have a heated discussion of……；表示连接的短语on the contrary,what is worse等使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
