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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或

修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.

 

1.very--so

2.regarded---regard

3.has--is

4.so去掉

5.This--It

6.Moreover--However

7.spend--spending

8.do harm for ---to

9.properly---proper

10.important--importance

【解析】

1.very—so 考查固定句型。So…that如此以致于。

2.regarded---regard 考查动词的时态。根据第一句话提到Nowadays可知用一般现在时。

3.has—is 考查固定句型。There be 表示有。。;

4.so去掉 考查连词。在英语中有因为没有所以,故去掉。

5.This--It 考查代词。It is convenient to do 做某事很方便。It做形式主语。

6.Moreover--However 考查副词。句意:然而一些学生认为网上有些不好的信息。与第二行提到Some students regarded it as a great helper表示对比,故用however.

7.spend--spending 考查动名词做主语。句意:玩游戏花费过多的时间不仅仅影响学习还有害健康;

8.do harm for ---to 考查固定短语。Do harm to 对。。有害;

9.properly---proper 考查形容词。Make use of 利用。Use 是名词,故用形容词来修饰。

10.—importance考查名词。Be of importance 等于be important 重要。

考点:短文改错;

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