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5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两赴,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词.
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
When I was a child,I spent more than ten years learn the violin.Therefore,I couldn't understand"real music".After I  graduated at high school,a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool.l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a gu itar player playing the guitar,which I really enjoyed.He became my the first guitar teacher.It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model.Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

分析 文章大意:本文主要讲了作者学吉他的经历.当我还是个孩子,我花了十几年学小提琴.不过,我不明白什么才是"真正的音乐".高中毕业后,一个朋友建议我们开始学习吉他,因为我们都认为这很酷. 我永远都不会忘记我们去吉他店买吉他那天.在那里,我看到了一个吉他手在弹吉他,我真的很喜欢.他就成了我的第一个吉他老师.我花了很长时间在几个优秀的型号当中挑选吉他.现在,吉他是我生命中最重要的部分,我每天都练习.

解答 When I was a child,I spent more than ten years learn the violin.Therefore,I couldn't 
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understand"real music".After I graduated at high school,a friend of mine suggested that we
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started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool.I will never forget the day
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on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store.There I saw a guitar player playing the
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guitar,which I really enjoyed.He became mythe first guitar teacher.It took me such
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importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.
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1.learn---learning  考查非谓语动词.本句中spend的搭配是:spend some time doing  something,所以用learning.
 2.Therefore--However 考查副词.前后两句之间的关系是转折关系.
3.at--from 考查介词搭配,毕业于学校,一般用介词from.
4.started--start 考查虚拟语气. 句中有suggest,表示建议,从句中应该用should+动词原形,should可以省略.
5.all--both 考查代词. 我的朋友和我"是两个人,不是指所有人,因此all---both.
6.that--which 考查定语从句.先行词是 day,在定语从句中作宾语,介词后用which.
7.去掉first前的the 考查冠词.first前面有物主代词就不需要冠词了.
8.choose前面加to 考查不定式.句型:It takes sb some time to do sth.
9.model--models 考查名词单复数.  前面有several 修饰的可数名词,应该用复数形式.
10,. importantly--important 考查形容词.系动词后用形容词.

点评 改错题要注意代词,连词以及词性、人称的转化.
做好短文改错题,可以从以下三方面去考虑:1.快速阅读短文,如抓住中心思想,从整体上对短文有个了解. 2.充分运用语言的基础知识,从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发,进行分析判断,尽快找出错误在何处. 3.重视整体和语境,从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组,判断是递进关系还是转折关系,是因果关系还是让步关系.

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