题目内容
假如你是李华,你所在学校的英语俱乐部将举行一个英语晚会。你准备邀请你的外国朋友John与你一起参加。
[写作内容]
请根据下面海报的内容,给John写一封邀请信,新的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
文章的开头和结尾已经给出,但不算入写作句数。
英语晚会
时间 | 11月28日晚7点30分 |
地点 | 英语俱乐部 |
活动内容 | 用英语交流、观看来自不同班级学生的表演 |
表演 | 互相交换小礼物、结交朋友 |
提供 | 水果和饮料 |
建议 | 如果你喜欢的话,可以自带食物 |
[参考词汇] 表演 performance 交换 exchange
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Dear John,
How’s everything? I’m writing to let you know about an English evening and invite you to join us.
………………………
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Cheers,
Li Hua
基础写作:(25分)
Dear John,
How’s everything? I’m writing to let you know about an English evening and invite you to join us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Cheers,
Li Hua
Dear John,
How’s everything? I’m writing to let you know about an English evening and invite you to join us.
The English Evening will start at 7:30 pm on April 15th and will be held in the English club. We have quite a few activities planned such as chatting with each other in English and watching some performances by students from different classes. What is more, we are encouraging participants to exchange small gifts with each other and make friends as well. We will be providing some fruit and drinks for the evening, but we suggest you bring some food with you if you like. I believe everyone will have a wonderful time at the English Evening.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Cheers,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求写一封邀请信,写作时注意书信的格式要正确;开头和结尾部分不计入总句数;必须用五句话来表达全部内容,不能超过或少于5个句子;所写内容以表格的形式呈现,一目了然;注意不能出现拼写和标点错误,必须使用到所给词汇。
亮点说明:范文开头交代了晚会开始的时间,举办地点,“The English Evening will start at 7:30 pm on April 15th and will be held in the English club. ”范文开头使用了一般将来时,并注意使用and连接前后句,使句子衔接显得紧凑;
范文使用了quite a few; such as; as well等短语,使文章显得充实;
范文注意使用What is more, but等来表示递进、转折等关系,很好的传达了晚会上需要注意的事项;
范文使用了将来进行时We will be providing some fruit and drinks for the evening;条件状语从句if you like;宾语从句I believe everyone will have a wonderful time at the English Evening.等语法知识,使作文的层次得到了提高。
考点:书信类作文