Question

【题目】你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问（English Study Advisor），请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。主要内容包括：

（1）母语是英语，汉语流利者优先；

（2）解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动；

（3）每周工作四小时，报酬面议；

（4）联系人：李华（Tel. 13011223344）

注意：

（1）词数100左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

English Study Advisor Wanted

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__________________________________________________Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

English Study Advisor Wanted

The Students’ Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English, answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.

The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.

If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.

Students’ Union

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，根据要求请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。主要内容包括：（1）母语是英语，汉语流利者优先；（2）解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动；（3）每周工作四小时，报酬面议；（4）联系人：李华（Tel. 13011223344）需要注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。写作时要完成试题规定的任务，要覆盖所有内容要点。要应用了较多语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面可以有些许错误，但是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;要具备较强的语言运用能力。

【亮点说明】完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容，应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview.是一个条件状语从句， The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English, answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.是一个比较长的复合句，运用了such as和or等连词，文章总体非常出彩。