Question

12．将下列连环画中女子、小狗和大猩猩（gorilla）之间所发生的事件作一合理的叙述，写成一篇80～120词的英文故事，以便刊登在校园网英文页面"Story-telling"栏目中．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画类写作，要求我们仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：女子、小狗和大猩猩（gorilla）之间所发生的事件作一合理的叙述．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述事件．第二部分为事件的高潮以及结局．
重点短语与句型：
stare at盯着看
be about to do…when..正要做某事…正在这时突然
due  to 因为
take off 脱下
more than非常
高分句型一：The food smelled so good that her pet dog's mouth watered，staring at it此句用了现在分词 staring作伴随状语
高分句型二：Frightened by the big animal，Mrs Smith had no idea what to do．此句用了过去分词作原因状语
 高分句型三：It was after it took off its mask that Mrs Smith realized Mr Smith，her husband此句用了it was…that 强调句型

解答 One day，Mrs Smith was cooking in the kitchen．The food smelled so good that her pet dog's mouth watered，staring at it．（高分句型一）After she finished cooking，Mrs Smith was about to take the dish out when she saw a gorilla standing in the kitchen．Due to panic，she dropped the plate on the floor and broke it．Just at that time，her dog rushed at once to enjoy the delicious food．Frightened by the big animal，Mrs Smith had no idea what to do．（高分句型二）（描述事件）
     However，the gorrilla began to speak，with abunch of flowers in hands，"Happy Birthday!"It was after it took off its mask that Mrs Smith realized Mr Smith，her husband．（ 高分句型三）He wanted to give her a big surprise on her birthday．Mrs Smith felt more than delighted．（事件的高潮以及结局）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧