Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序。用英语写一篇短文向校刊“英语园地”投稿，记述你和同学们上周组织“向白色污染说不”主题活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, together with my classmates, I organized a meaningful activity with the theme “Say No to White Pollution”.

One evening, while I was reading a newspaper, a piece of news on white pollution caught my eye. The seriousness of this issue left me wondering what I should do as a citizen of the earth.

During a class break the next day, I shared the news with some of my classmates. We all agreed that something must be done to make a change, no matter how trivial it might seem. After a thorough discussion, we set our plan for a 2-day campaign and made some necessary preparations.

Last weekend, our plan became reality. At the front gate of Hongxing Community, we promoted the idea of environmental protection. Meanwhile, we gave out eco-friendly bags to passers-by, hoping that the bags could serve as a daily reminder of the green life we advocated. Impressed with our efforts, they all promised to do as best as they could to avoid white pollution.

Before the activity came to an end, I was interviewed by BTV, which meant I could make our message heard by a much larger crowd of people. What a pleasant surprise! While introducing what we had done, I couldn’t help but to picture the day when this issue was finally solved with every individual’s effort. The earth will surely be a better place then.

【解析】

第一步：审题

体裁：记叙文（图画类作文）

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。

要求：1.根据图片先后顺序展开。

2.为保护环境，做了哪些事情。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

together with; a meaningful activity;catch my eye;shared... with...; make a change;made some necessary preparations; meanwhile; serve as; promise to do; came to an end; a much larger crowd of people

第三步：连词成句

1.Last week, together with my classmates, I organized a meaningful activity with the theme “Say No to White Pollution”.

2. One evening, while I was reading a newspaper, a piece of news on white pollution caught my eye.

3. During a class break the next day, I shared the news with some of my classmates.

4. We all agreed that something must be done to make a change, no matter how trivial it might seem.

5. We set our plan for a 2-day campaign and made some necessary preparations.

6. Meanwhile, we gave out eco-friendly bags to passers-by, hoping that the bags could serve as a daily reminder of the green life we advocated.

7.Before the activity came to an end, I was interviewed by BTV, which meant I could make our message heard by a much larger crowd of people.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：润色修改

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。