Question

下面是一段文章，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital. We bought her some flower and fruit. She was glad to see us. Many people began to avoid see her after she was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the HIV virus mustn’t be infected through daily communication and that those who suffering from AIDS shouldn’t be looked down. We had a talk with the woman and gave her some CDs as gifts. She was moved to tears and promise to be optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. We promised to see her again before left. In my opinion, the world will become more beautiful if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble.

Answer 1

Last Sunday we went to see a (an) AIDS patient in hospital. We bought her some flower (flowers) and fruit. She was glad to see us. Many people began to avoid see (seeing) her after she was infected to (with) HIV virus. A doctor told us that the HIV virus mustn’t (couldn’t) be infected through daily communication and that those who (-who / +are) suffering from AIDS shouldn’t be looked down (upon). We had a talk with the woman and gave her some CDs as gifts. She was moved to tears and promise (promised) to be optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. We promised to see her again before left (leaving). In my opinion, the world will become more beautiful if all of us love each other and help those in the (- the) trouble.