题目内容
短文改错
下面是一段文章,请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr.Liu Jin, aging 39, is working in a factory in Shanghai as an chemical engineer.After he graduated from Nanjing University in 1978, he sent to Tokyo University to study the chemical engineering.Through her hard work for 4 years, he achieved remarkably results in scientific research.But he received a doctor's degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary but he didn't receive it.In 1983, he returned to China without a moment's hesitations.He has made up of his mind to devote all his life to our country.
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