题目内容
19.你校将要举办一次主题为"how to communicate with friends"的英语演讲比赛,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿.要点如下:1.尊重并信任朋友
2.常与朋友聊天
3.换位思考问题
注意:
1.词数100字以上.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.参考词汇:换位思考 put oneself in sb's shoes.
Hello,everyone,I'd like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our friends.
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分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息学校将要举办一次主题为"how to communicate with friends"的英语演讲比赛,用英语写一篇演讲稿,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:尊重并信任朋友;常与朋友聊天;换位思考问题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
高分句型一:Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow 朋友是我们可以与之分享快乐和悲伤的人.
高分句型二:Don't be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions 即使有时他们冒犯了你,千万不要对他们凶.
句型一 who can share our happiness and sorrow 该句是一个由who 引导的定语从句,who在从句中做主语,代替前面的先行词people
句型二 ①Don't be rude to them 该句是一个祈使句,且此处使用了否定形式 ②even if they offend you on some occasions 该句是一个由even if 引导的让步状语从句
解答 Hello,everyone,I'd like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our friends.Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow.(高分句型一) Everyone needs friends to care about,so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.(提出论点) Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with friends.
In the first place,we should respect and trust our friends.Don't be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions.(高分句型二) Second,if we often talk with them about our life and experience,the friendship can be strengthened.Third,if sometimes we don't agree with each other over some minor thins,we should try to put oursleves in their shoes as friendship should be established on understanding each other.(阐述原因)
Thank you for listening.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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