Question

以A Ten-Minute Break 为题，写一篇词数为100左右的短文。短文的内容必须包括以下几点：

1、课间十分钟的休息是必要的；2、要注意休息的方式，别让自己过于兴奋；

3、自己通常是怎样利用这十分钟的。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

                            A Ten-Minute Break 

As students, we have classes from early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.

     During the ten-minute break we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.  

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercise. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇简短的论说文，内容提示较详细，学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，根据提示写作分为三部分内容，尤其要具体写出自己的课间十分钟是怎么度过的。另外，要注意文章的时态，要用一般现在时。用第一人称有单数也要用复数。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如definitely important ，feel both physically and mentally tired ，get rid of，instead of等， 还运用了名词性从句What we need is to have a real rest，定语从句So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.及状语从句When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.等。并注意了句子的衔接如：therefore，otherwise等。

考点：简短的论说文