Question

进入高三以后，大部分同学觉得时间紧了，学习任务重了，所以有些同学课间十分钟休息时间也在看书做题，请你以 A Ten-minute Break为题，用英语写一篇短文，描写这一现象并谈谈自己的看法和做法。

注意：1、词数120左右；

2、短文中不能出现本人相关信息。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible vision:

As a senior three student, time seems very limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break we had better do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always wonderful. Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I have a small talk with my classmates or just take a walk outside. Besides I like looking at green trees out of the window, doing nothing. This will help to relax myself. When the next class begins I feel refreshed again.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于半开放性作文。话题是课间十分钟。有些学生把这十分钟用来学习。请发表对这样问题的看法。首先考生需要描述这一现象，其次要分析该现象出现的原因：学生的压力太大，渴望利用一切可以利用的时间来进行学习。各科作业太多，逼迫学生不得不争分夺秒，不放松任何一点时间。分析这样做的结果：影响学生的上课的学习效率，反而得不偿失。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：本文属于半开放性作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。