题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你叫李华。准备写信给英语报社编辑,反映你最近生活中所遇到的烦恼。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一封信。
写作要点如下:
1. 最近遇到一些问题,不知如何做,希望得到帮助;
2. 你自己有自己学习以外的其他爱好和兴趣;
3. 你父母认为你应该在学习上多花时间提高成绩,上好大学。
写作要求:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 信的格式已给出,请写信件正文;
3. 不能使用真实的个人信息。
Dear editor,
I have had a problem recently and …
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Look forward to getting your advice soon.
Yours,
Li Hong
【答案】
Dear editor.
I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.
I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades. In this way, 1 can go to a good university in the future.
However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks I have a chance to become a real future star. As you know, it always takes me a lot of time to practise and take part in games. They are angry with me and don't allow me to do it again.
As for me, I like basketball and 1 hope I will be well trained and become a super star in the future.
Look forward to getting your advice soon.
Yours,
Li Hong
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语between ..and..在。。和。。之前;in this way用这种方法;take part in参加;be allowed to do 被允许做某事;Look forward to盼望着;I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.这个句子what引导宾语从句;As you know, it always takes me a lot of time to practise and take part in games.这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句;