题目内容
16．今年寒假，我的邻居-来青务工的老吴，没有回老家过年．他的孩子东东与我成了好朋友，我们常在一起做作业，我帮他学英语，带他到海边玩，还为他买了新年礼物…．东东过得很快乐，我也感到很有意义．请根据提示用英语写一篇题为What I did is worthwhile的短文，发送到China Daily"寒假征文"栏目．
注意：
1．可适当发挥，增加细节，使行文连贯、完整；
2．词数120-150字．
分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：His child，whose name is Dongdong，is a lovely and clever boy．他的孩子，名叫东东，是一个可爱聪明的男孩．
亮点句型二：He told me that this was the most interesting Spring Festival he had had．他告诉我这是他过的最有趣的春节．
解答 Every winter holiday，most people who work outside return home to reunite with their family．But this year，my neighbourhood，Lao Wu，didn't．His wife and child were along with him，so he chose to stay in Qingdao．【老吴没回家过年】
His child，whose name is Dongdong，is a lovely and clever boy．（亮点句型一）Because school was over，he started to play with me together．Soon we became good friends．We talked a lot，and we often did our homework together．I helped him with his English．One day I even took him to play at the seaside．When the Spring Festival came，I bought him some presents for the coming new year．He was very happy and of course，thankful to me．He told me that this was the most interesting Spring Festival he had had．（亮点句型二）As to me，I also found it so meaningful．【对留守儿童的帮助】
Friendship is always valuable to everyone，isn't it？
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
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Being a paradise to many tourists，Tibet has been the dreaming wonderland and attracted tourists all over the world．And now as tourism in Tibet enters the peak season，more and more visitors are longing to travel to the mysterious highland．Meanwhile，they are worried about the altitude sickness （高原反应） which is most likely to experience in Tibet．Experts advised that tourists to Tibet should have a scientific and better understanding of the disease．
Altitude sickness，also known as acute high altitude disease （AHAD），is a common physiological reaction caused by acute exposure to low oxygen content and air pressure and dry weather when people getting up to a place with a certain altitude．
Acute altitude reaction usually occurs within hours or days after a person goes up to a highland above 2，700meters above sea level from a region with a lower altitude．It is believed that most visitors to Tibet will be certain to suffer from at least some symptoms which will generally disappear through acclimatization in several hours to several days．It presents as a collection of nonspecific symptoms including headache，shortness of breath，oppressed feeling in the chest，lack of appetite，fever，dizziness，fatigue or weakness，etc．Some will even take the chance to come down with drowsiness，insomnia，adrenaline surge，nosebleed and so on．
However，experts point out that human bodies can adapt to the surroundings （适应环境） in a gradual way．Therefore，altitude sickness is not that scary．
To prevent the occurrence of altitude sickness，visitors should have a proper preparation in advance and avoid heavy physical activities before they go to Tibet．After getting off the plane，they should try not to carry heavy things，run or avoid outdoor activities as much as possible．
Nifedipinum，Nuodikang Capsule and Suoluomabao Capsule （胶囊），which is also known as Hongjingtian Capsule，may help some people prevent the occurrence of altitude sickness when they are taken three days before people arrive in a highland．
Visitors with a severe cold，a high fever，acute or chronic pulmonary diseases，severe cardiovascular diseases，women in late pregnant and kids under three years old should avoid traveling to regions with a high altitude．
Proper rest，considerate preparation，and enough oxygen uptake can all help to relieve altitude sickness．If a patient does not show any sign of improvements after three to four hours，he/she should go to a hospital for medical treatment．
Title：How to Prevent from Altitude Sickness
| Tibet is an （66）attractive/ideal site for tourists，but altitude sickness will be probably along with tourists． | |
| Causes | Altitude sickness （67）results/arises from low oxygen content and air pressure and dry weather． |
| （68）Symptoms | ◇Headache，shortness of breath，oppressed feeling in the chest，lack of appetite，fever，dizziness，fatigue or weakness，etc． |
| Prevention | ◇Human bodies can adapt to the surroundings （69）gradually． ◇Visitors can take some useful （70）medicines in advance so as to avoid altitude sickness． ◇Visitors can take some （71）measures to help prevent the occurrence of altitude sickness． ◇The people with （72）special symptoms should avoid traveling to Tibet． |
| （73）Treatments | ◇Proper rest，considerate preparation，and enough oxygen uptake can help to （74）relieve altitude sickness． ◇A patient who does not （75）improve after three to four hours should go to a hospital for treatment． |